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If you want to give me up
That's fine, just go ahead and say so
If you want to call it quits or take a break
Honey, I'm don't mind - honest
If you want to take back your love
Don't worry, I'll be alright

My heart'll mend, I hope yours does too
We both know it will take some time
I'd rather leave you with a smile
Let you know I appreciated us
Then have you walk away with hurt
And constantly second-guessing

I feel like I'm talking to piece of ice
The cold shoulder is so overrated
When you say everything's alright
But it's clear to me it's not
You're just using that excuse to not talk
If didn't want to talk, why not just say so?

My heart'll mend, I hope yours does too
We both know it will take some time
I'd rather leave you with a smile
Let you know I appreciated us
Then have you walk away with hurt
And constantly second-guessing

You ought to know by now
I'm not glass, I won't break
From the tears I'm crying
I'm happy for the time we had
So, if this is goodbye…
I want you to know:

My heart'll mend, I hope yours does too
We both know it will take some time
I'd rather leave you with a smile
Let you know I appreciated us
Then have you walk away with hurt
And constantly second-guessing

If you want to give me up
That's fine, just go ahead and say so
If you want to call it quits or take a break
Honey, I'm don't mind - honest
If you want to take back your love
Don't worry, I'll be alright...

[spoken:]

                                                                        So, if this is goodbye…
                                                                        I just want you to know,
                                                                        My heart'll mend, given enough time
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Author's Comments

a) emotions are good for getting over writers' block. (being hormonal finally pays off for something...!)

b) I suggest you find "Down" by Jason Walker on youtube when you read this.

c) I hope you enjoy it (my lyrics and the song by Jason).

d) "Tears" is a word from the 300 list.

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This is beautiful.

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Wow..this is really touching, and well written!
I will have to look for that song on youtube as well!

--
That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.

~St. John of the Cross
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:tighthug: Thank you!

--
It is an act of imagination to live differently from everyone else.

“I nined a elevenderloin with my fivek!" - Victor Borge

Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary. ~ Kahlil Gibran
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:hug: Thanks! Yes, yes, do! ...actually, I think I have it, if you'd like?

--
It is an act of imagination to live differently from everyone else.

“I nined a elevenderloin with my fivek!" - Victor Borge

Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary. ~ Kahlil Gibran
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I'd love to hear it! Maybe next time we're on MSN?

--
That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.

~St. John of the Cross
:iconaestheticparadise:
Of course! Remind me! :D

--
It is an act of imagination to live differently from everyone else.

“I nined a elevenderloin with my fivek!" - Victor Borge

Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary. ~ Kahlil Gibran

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