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I want to be five once more,
just so I could meet you then -
on the playground, or at school
and we'd click instantly,
trade secrets and stories and
declare the other has cooties;
we'd worm our ways into
respective families' hearts

You know I think we'd be the best of friends

- to be six once more -
at our birthday party
where we turn the bed
into a makeshift tent and
flashlight we've borrowed,
stay up all night telling stories
with invisible friends and
a bowl of popcorn we've discarded

You know I think we'd be the best of friends

- to be seven once more -
fancy clothes, lunches packed, fussing parents
carpooling on the first day of school
singing ABBA at the top of our lungs
only to be interrupted by a punch as
a shout about the VW bugs passing us
then at school, silly fights over who
can swing higher to reach the sky

You know I think we'd be the best of friends
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Author's Comments

...so, I realized that it's a late friend's birthday and I just had to write something to commemorate it.

- however, this is also for quite a few of my now close friends, who I'd have like to have met at a young age. I think it would have been a lot of fun to see how we'd have reacted to each other. :D

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I love the detail in this - it definitely draws the reader in! Very well written. Love it!

I think you and I would have clicked, as kids :)

--
That thou mayest be everything
seek to be nothing.

~St. John of the Cross
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I fully agree with you here, it would've been nice to have grown up together but I don't regret the times we've shared and will share together either! Every day is a pleasure :hug:

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Aw, thank you! I'm glad you loved it!

I think we would've too. :D

--
It is an act of imagination to live differently from everyone else.

“I nined a elevenderloin with my fivek!" - Victor Borge

Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary. ~ Kahlil Gibran
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It would have been nice; unfortunately, that's not how it happened. I wouldn't try our shared time for anything! Every day is most certainly a pleasure :hug:

--
It is an act of imagination to live differently from everyone else.

“I nined a elevenderloin with my fivek!" - Victor Borge

Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary. ~ Kahlil Gibran

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